a/.        A voice is also adopted

b/.        Important to be constant with the POV

c/.        Exceptions………… Of Course.  For drama or shock

She was dreading her first kiss on her first date, she braced herself for the event, but he was gentle and kind he even thought of asking her if she might become his regular girl. He asked if they could meet again next Tuesday.

OR

She was dreading her first kiss on her first date, she braced herself for the event, but he was clearly very happy with the gentleness of the kiss and so pleased that he wanted to see her again on Tuesday.

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